Hello everyone!I am back from a long delay and i am here to post my metamorphosis.For those of you who have never seen my work,i spent the last research studying the effects of HIV/AIDS among teenagers.I went deeply and researched on why many youths are affected by this disease. Personally i would like to guide the youths and tell them they choose the right friends who will not mislead their life.I would also like to show the youths that their life is very much expensive.I would also like to tell them to choose friends who will broaden their thinking and those who are mostly focused with education.
I read a few of your research rounds and they were very informative. I liked the summary you wrote here and how you tied in your own opinion and what you've taken away from this research personally into your metamorphosis. Going forward, I would maybe include a little more information on what you found so people who haven't read your research can follow along better, too.
A good conclusion for this round, I am excited to see where you go next
This is great! Your research in the past cycle was very well-done and you are obviously very passionate about the subject. Next, you could focus on a similar topic but take it in a different direction. Including your personal opinion was a nice touch! Good work!